Hello guys!!
This time I would like you to write about a trip you have taken.
Please include the introduction, body and conclusion, so the essay will have three paragraphs.
Do not digress. Stick to the point. If you are talking about Miami, do not finish mentioning California.
You can start your essay with a question or a comparison. Did I like Miami? Some people love this city, not me... State clearly what you are going to write about: I will write about Miami and the reasons why I like it.
The second paragraph is the body, you should give examples about the trip you've chosen.
The conclusion can be defined by: In conclusion, considering all what I said before...
This essay is due on August 19th.
Take care!!
Your teacher.
Bariloche is a good place to enjoy your vacations if you like winter...
ReplyDeleteI really loved this winter vacations, I felt so comfortable everywhere I have gone in that city. There are so many beautiful places to see and to apreciate the view of "Nahuel Huapi Lake" and hills with snow at the top, where you can skii.
In conclusion, Bariloche is just an amazing city where you can see views that you have never imagined before.
Hope you liked it teacher!
Sofia Lujan Chavez
Well done Luján!! I will add more ideas in all the paragraphs. =)
DeleteYou write very well!! =)
DeleteFoz do Iguazu
ReplyDeleteThe last year i went with my family to Foz do Iguazu, If you want to have a fun and short trip it's the best place to go.
i went to aquamania resort, to a Buddhist Temple (it is a beautiful temple of Foz), parque das aves (is a bird park), parque nacional do iguazu etc. Was the best trip with my family. I felt so exited, an very happy.
Considering all what I said before Foz do Iguazu is a beautiful place where you can see one of the new seven wonders of nature
Estrella Ayala
See you!
Good job Estrella!! Pay attention to "The last year..." and start a sentence with a subject, for example It was the best trip.
DeleteNice essay!!
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ReplyDeleteHello! I will write about my trip experience on the Riviera Maya, Quintana Roo.
DeleteMy family and I visited this wonderful place during the summer holidays, we toured places like Chichen Itza, Coba, Tulum and fantastics beaches as Playa del Carmen and Playa Paraiso.
In conclusion,this trip was a fantastic and incredible experience where I could see once more the wonderful is the nature.
XOXO
Andrea Benitez
Excellent Andrea!! You could see How wonderful nature is! ;)
DeleteNice job, but too short. You write so well that you can make it longer!! ;)
Camboriu.
ReplyDeleteLast summer i went to camboriu with my family, is a great place to go in vacations.
We went to the attractives beaches: Laranjeiras, The Central beach, Praia do Pinho y Estalerinho.
Others places i visited with my family in camboriu were: das Cabras island, Unipraias park, and theme park beto carrero.
Hotels in camboriu are very cute.
Camboriu is a good place to relax with your family in vacations.
Sofia Rivarola.
Good job Sofia! Pay attention that you go ON vacations, and that names are with capital letters (Beto Carrero).
DeleteYou write very well, so next time make your essay longer =)
If you like summer, Cancun is an excellent place to go vacation, you can go alone or with your family, you will enjoy anyway.
ReplyDeleteI very liked this city, especially the beach. In this city there are so many beautiful places to visit, you can go to Margarita island or Xcaret park, in these places you can see so many animals. If you want to have fun Cancun has several nightclubs.
Cancun have so many places to enjoy, it is an excellent idea if you are thinking of spending your next vacation there.
Nicolas Melgarejo.
Nice essay Nico!! Pay attention to the order: I liked this city very much. Also, you say Cancun has...
DeleteExcellent! =)
Hello teacher, I wrote to explain what I did on my vacation in United States The cities we visited was California, Washington, Los Angeles, and New york. I went with my family to those cities.
ReplyDeleteWe saw the monument of Lincoln and the white house and the Jefferson Memorial is so beautiful , my family and i took photos on the bridge brooklyn, in front of the statue of the liberty and in the times square, my sister and I attended the concert of katy perry in the Madison square garden, we walked on the central park and after that we had a pinic.
In Los Angeles We visited the Universal Hollywood Studios, I saw many corpses on the Natural history museum and in the night we saw stars and planets on the griffith observatory, we attended the Opera on the dolby theatre.
Finally in California we went to the beaches: Laguna Beach, The Killer, Venice, Newport, La Jolla Cove and Santa Monica beach.
It was the best vacation ever!
Verónica Baruja
Wow!!! You did all that!??? Excellent! Pay attention that names are in Capital letters, such as Brooklyn or Central Park, and the commas like In Los Angeles, we visited..., Finally, ...
DeleteNice job!!
Hi! Two years ago i have traveled to the united states, it was an incredible travel. My brother and my mom traveled with me, we enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteFirst we go to miami, we did so many things like go shopping or to the beach, i bought so many things, all was in sale!!
Then we go to orlando we enjoyed it so much. In orlando we go to the universal's and disney's parks, all were great but the best was island of adventures, because is the most complete and incredible park.
This year im going to do an interchange to germany 5 months, i think it will be great.
Good Job Giuliano! Pay attention to the tenses and Capital letters: I traveled to the United States, first we went to Miami.
DeleteNext time make your conclusion longer =)
Good luck in Germany!